Shared Affinity

Shared Affinity

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Shared Affinity



This being

Needs imbibing of continuum splendours

To quench

My unfilled vessel’s inexhaustible thirst


For existing

Devoid of adore presence is an incomplete

Cold emptiness

Persistently plaguing inner inert feelings


Soul stimulations

With mutual lithe loving reverberations

Brings out

Superlatives in an individual’s personality


To stand

Upon foundations built solid with respect

Brings optimism

When shared passions are freely offered


Please take

My outstretched hand in mutual friendship

In promise

To freely offer my humble services to you


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Needs imbibing of continuum splendours
To quench
My unfilled vessel’s inexhaustible thirst

This somehow makes me think of a vessel...which needs blood to satisfy it's thirst... and is never satisfied with n number of sacrifices....

Love the usage...soul stimulation...and the solid foundation of respect..

But for me friendship is a gift
It's something we happily give isn't it...
From one heart to other a bond of happiness ..trust and mutual respect...you got it all in the poem... :))


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Aloha Phill, I really enjoyed this - generous & soulful read. We are made for this - kinship, brotherhood. Great writing! Mahalo.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written poem... We do need a shared affinity in life... Thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Needs imbibing of continuum splendours
To quench
My unfilled vessel’s inexhaustible thirst

This somehow makes me think of a vessel...which needs blood to satisfy it's thirst... and is never satisfied with n number of sacrifices....

Love the usage...soul stimulation...and the solid foundation of respect..

But for me friendship is a gift
It's something we happily give isn't it...
From one heart to other a bond of happiness ..trust and mutual respect...you got it all in the poem... :))


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and we exist because of a reason and for a reason nice writing as always

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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