Inspiration

Inspiration

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
"

An irrational and unconscious burst of creativity.

"

Inspiration



 

Creative impulse

Of the imagination

To breathe upon thought

 

Phillozofee @ 2008

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


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How can I have missed this? Fantastic. What a beauty and what a perfection: Let me tell you, I absolutely adored the depth. This has a double meaning to me: I understand it also like help, when we have a heavy heart, when we perhaps need a solution for the next minutes... or when we are angry and just say words without breating about them...(that could happen to me for I am impatient).

I 'd have an idea if Charlie K. would make an implementation for us?
Like ....now I came to your site.
I was looking a while in your work and browsing, till I found a work which I didn't review yet.
It would be interesting to know, if this is possible, no? (I mean, without taking to much time to esablish it).
It would be, i.e., like I come to your site and like ..it would say...a number of works is XX...which I didn't read yet and I click that icon and then I get the ability to chose one of those not reviewed ones.... such an act of providing a practical means for accomplishing a number of poems... might be not a clever idea but I had it on my mind... Also after reading Rachel Blackbirdsong I had the same idea... Keep smiling.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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How can I have missed this? Fantastic. What a beauty and what a perfection: Let me tell you, I absolutely adored the depth. This has a double meaning to me: I understand it also like help, when we have a heavy heart, when we perhaps need a solution for the next minutes... or when we are angry and just say words without breating about them...(that could happen to me for I am impatient).

I 'd have an idea if Charlie K. would make an implementation for us?
Like ....now I came to your site.
I was looking a while in your work and browsing, till I found a work which I didn't review yet.
It would be interesting to know, if this is possible, no? (I mean, without taking to much time to esablish it).
It would be, i.e., like I come to your site and like ..it would say...a number of works is XX...which I didn't read yet and I click that icon and then I get the ability to chose one of those not reviewed ones.... such an act of providing a practical means for accomplishing a number of poems... might be not a clever idea but I had it on my mind... Also after reading Rachel Blackbirdsong I had the same idea... Keep smiling.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

INSPIRING!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true poem. I love that you wrote it in just four lines. It's short, but gets right to the point. You signed the review off by saying, 'God bless', which makes me want to ask, are you a Christian? I am and it can be hard to find friends who are too. You made me very curious. :)
Hey, and thanks for the review on "Breathe". What you said is true. We need to step away from the circling world and breathe. I think that can be hard to do. It's like stopping in the middle of watching a Manchester United football game and saying, ''I should go fold laundry.'' Life really is about hurrying, but we need to breathe. Thank you again,
BLFK

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's short and right to the point. I love the image your last line gives me, its so right on target. Love it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah, that's inspiration for ya. I really admire the final line: "To breath[e] upon thought". Ahh... the birth of brand new art. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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