Who Touched Me?

Who Touched Me?

Ragged amid the beginning and end of all things

Manifests an infinite, immeasurable, eternal spirit

Transcendent consummator of all things divine

With unconditional compassion and grace

Resurrecting a humility within this void of clay

 

Merciful presence calms this tempest splintered heart

A clandestine compassion restoring fragile sanity

Reconnecting, revitalising righteous oneness

Showers down in droplets of eternal gaiety

Healing a brokenness of forgotten dreams

 

Dominant though my blatant imperfections are

Your judgment of forgiveness sets me free

Prostration turns to standing head held high

Rebirth of new beginning stirs within a battered soul

And all because you touched me once again

 

Phill (ozofee) @2010

Reviews

[Bubo]

Rebirth of new beginning stirs within a battered soul
And all because you touched me once again

Beautiful...........full of rebirth and hurt that can be healed by one touch, bringing dreams into reality, restoring the heart............it's wonderful to see you here after so long.

[Helen Woodward]

He definitely touched you as he does with us all, the difference here is that you recognize the touch and that alone is a gift...
A wonderful testament to your deep and unfailing faith my dear friend, you are so gracious in all you say and do...I am certain he is well pleased.

xxxoooxxx

[littlelilypurplebride]

Loved these Last lines very lovely powerful full of
Touching heartfelt emotion Yes with loving words a gentle Hug sense of comforting Uplifting of the heart always makes us feel better this is such a lovely write Thank you for all your Inspiring and lovely reviews god bless lily



Dominant though my blatant imperfections are
Your judgment of forgiveness sets me free
Prostration turns to standing head held high
Rebirth of new beginning stirs within a battered soul
And all because you touched me once again

[Valentine]

The last two lines sinched this one..for me..sometimes it taakes a touch by someone to erase the pain and make a person feel that life is worth living..lola nd God bless..valentine

[Ladysue]

This flowed wonderfully. I like this. the last two lines are very moving...A lovely piece...nicely done...

[An Ordinary Woman]

Hello Phill Oz O'fee! it sure has been a while! How are you?

I enjoyed this poem. Using a question as a title works really well in this instance. Your ending ties in nicely, too. It's a lovely poem friend.