Intrigue

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

Hush ...

Intrigue

Clandestine affair

Secretly undertaken

Abandoning truth

Phillozofee@2011

© 2011 Phill Oz O'fee

Author's Note

Note - Haiku: a form of Japanese poetry with 17 syllables in three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.

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Helen Woodward

Sensible Haiku Phill in that the rules are followed stringently and the message is clear...
Deception and lies are too common place.
You always know what to say in such glowing terms and short form...pleasing to the eye and challenging to the heart.

Blessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Posted 12 Years Ago

emmajoy

finely put, smoothly put, imaginatively put ..

senryu i think.. haiku based around nature ..

appreciated

Posted 12 Years Ago

Ladysue

oh this is good and so true your words...well done...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Lilly Negoi

more like a senryu from my point of view - but well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on March 28, 2011
Last Updated on March 28, 2011

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

About

I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..