Through My Eyes

There has been only just the one,

Who's smile made me believe my search was done.

The way we made each other feel,

I hoped I wasn't dreaming, that it was real.

The magic I felt during the first gaze into those eyes.

I prayed it would never end,

Because my mind and heart had started to mend.

Every word I spoke about is true,

to think they're not, makes me sad and blue.

Every moment we spent together was bliss,

right down to that very first kiss.

At that moment in my heart I knew,

that our love for each other was very true.

I sit here today, and wonder how it can be,

how I lost your trust and love for me?

I do have issues, this I know,

Who I really am should surelly show.

Yes, my mind is fragile, I know it's weak,

Sometimes I don't know when not to speak.

You told me I said some words that were totally mean,

which makes me feel dirty and unclean.

Sometimes my thoughts can be so unclear,

But I know that you make me happy when you are near.

I love the time we spend together,

Even if it's to discuss the weather.

I wish that you could truely believe,

That all your dreams are there for you to acheive.

Every word your poems do speak,

In my knees I do get weak.

You told me you loved me, you said I was full of heart,

It hurts me, it's painful we have to be appart.

I know the connection we made has to be still there,

Because there is still moments together, we want to share.

In my eyes you are always beautiful

no matter what you wear,

no matter how you fix your hair.

There is no one else that can compare.

Author's Note

please be honest.

Reviews

[The Scholar]

Aww this is so touching and sad.
Very well written, nice flow, and lovely poetry.

You wrote this piece in such a perfect way, that it almost seems I CAN actually see 'through your eyes.' Nicely done

[floarealbastra10]

oh really?

[roy mccarthy]

nice poem,
flows well!
you look like a pikey dude!

[Pikey.B*****d]

maybe, if she knew I how I feel, but I'd the lucky one, if things work out

[floarealbastra10]

aww how beautiful,she must be one lucky girl