Some sort of principle

So much silence has sparked

The enviable

Inevitable start

Accepting shortcomings

For an angel heart

Some in probation

Others feed to fly

The lies we live with and for

To keep up

Some ice frozen on steel bars

Today a pretty day

No disappointments

Given no expectations

Nothing to hide

Or pushed to the side

Principle removed

And to no one's surprise

Rising for a solute nothingness 

Fallen for everything

Trying to hide 

Some none complacency 

Pushing things to the side

Beyond up

So cold within

And outside

Fire less logged onto a pile 

Until one more day passes by

You realized

Nothing to find

Fighting a piece of my mind

With no peace you confide

Confusing a careless motive

For a calm

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

Thank You Nisreen for sharing.I loved it :)!!!!!!!!!

[Ana B.]

Absolutely lovely! As usual, you write brilliantly dear poet :) Aren't there some many angels in probation indeed....very glad i stopped by. It's been a while...

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Sweet poem I would say....but somehow not upto the standards you have set....please dont mind my words, i have been avid fan of your writings..nevertheless good one....

[B]

I accept all criticism
Its the only way i could possibly get better at anything

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Please dont mind my words... its my take on it... May be I missed some point in this one.... I didnt wish to criticize... i just stated what I feel....sorry

[B]

No dont be sorry

I am gonna rework this one

Thank you

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Today a pretty day
No disappointments...

It's a good thought to begin the new year with, Nisreen. Like always, outstanding. :) Rudi

[B]

Thanks .................

[andrew mitchell]

you are wise beyond your years Nisreen! I think you should write your writes on scrolls now to be found in the future hidden in an Egyptian pyramid or a temple in the mountains somewhere. Imagine the look when they discover It's you!

[B]

lol that sounds funny lol
Toilet scrolls lol ..... and rolls

[dan]

Nisreen, If one stands by his/her principles one can feel the strength provided. When principles are abandoned things may tend to go sideways. "Nothing to find, fighting a piece of my mind." This type of regret may arrive to show one that principles should be held onto, followed to the end. This piece illustrates that reality. Very nicely done! take care...dan

[B]

To grab onto them is no easy job
but worth the effort in every sense of the word
Thanks Dan

[usman]

a struggle Indeed,you really picture it right

[B]

Thank you Usman

[wordman]

a description of life and the many facets of people and attitudes
a beautiful day,no expecitations,looking to judge or be judged..another one of
your deep poems tp provoke thought !

[B]

I guess its a walk into truly loving people
Thank you for your kind review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but is it a careless motive? or just that the other refuses to judge, nitpick...and accepts without harsh criticism...we are all human...and expectations always deliver disappointment...but acceptance breeds love and understanding.

[B]

And in that lies a principle to only monitor our own acts
and be gentle with anything outside of our own self
Its not being careless it is rather being merciful

Thank you J
You seem to get me so well