Ink red pond

Small pond ripples curved voice

Beauty settles in dusty green

A dark spark sun the edgy horizon

Deep yellow waves in defensive tide

Soft words spoken in chime like pipes

Risen empire of angels collide

The sky rained in purple dots

Enshrining crowns of the earth 

A dress of transparent sentiment 

Loudly thunders in hover enchantress

A Jungle of tree like form

Upon story lines written in rose

A flower banks this river in silence

Counting letters yearning it's throne 

Kingdoms built on the outskirts of reality

A city of lilac blue scene

Tender is the wind's brush of fur

Crystal reflections on still waters

Feeding souls of mercy upon shelter

Young eyes look into a vessel of hope

Crossing the lanterns of Mr. George

Eager to nature made by the hands of God  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description. You create places and visions for the reader. The lines told and asked questions. A very good ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Another superb write of imagery taking the reader to places that you want us to observe. A nice write very similar to Serendipity and Poetry World ,both outstanding contributors on their writings on WC. I wonder if I am right??????

[wordman]

the begining of creation in all it`s glory

[B]

Nice take on this one :)

[aLittlePain]

Beautiful flowing piece, ethereal almost! There is an abstractness about this but the images present with such clarity. I agree with Jacobs take....the earth being pure and unspoiled. Very nice piece. Regards Rach

[B]

Thanks Rach :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this...to me...it is that great imagination of the earth without us on it...we destroy, we clutter...but nature in its purest form...parts engaging with others...everything pure, everything real, everything beautiful...
what have we done?

j.

[B]

I know
we were acting human !!!!
thanks J

[Ana B.]

Lovely piece, dear author :) the line ''Tender is the wind's brush of fur'' is sheer class!

[B]

thank you so much Ana

[Einstein Noodle]

about as abstract as it gets says i! ;) lots of music in images ..love the flowers and river ..one to simply go with the flow and relax... float downstream ahhhhhhh ... but who the heck is Mr. George?? :}
E.

[B]

i don't know
George of the jungle
btw i love him lol

thanks E

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha! i do too!