Worn out

Worn out

A Poem by B

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I once wore this coat
It once covered my soul

You once made me see nothing
But your world and your words

Only lately 
I am not sure anymore

You seem to be there
And i still feel cold

Somehow it's still raining
Sometimes i just run out

When you least expect it
Because i can't feel cold anymore

Worn out with holes everywhere
You notice so little

Assume too much
So tonight i took off the coat

To look at it once more
The white wool is slowly withering

I am slowly dimming out
Maybe i need to think things over

Maybe its not working
I need time to gain perspective

Just whatever you do
Don't come close 

Something feels wrong about those sleeves
Your eyes don't shine like they once did

Your greetings are empty
I no longer see a smile

You no longer hug from far
The buttons all fell out

You don't smell like my own
Not anymore

The label assumes care
100 percent truth 

I think it was all a lie
Nothing genuine about this fabric

When you take out your knife
Stabbing at the lines tearing out the back

You once used to be real
It filled the air

You took off the lavender 
By our door

The calendar days you rip so hard
Your thoughts have become dark

Lost in this oversize
You stretched out the sleeves too thin

You once held me so well
Without touching me 

Something went wrong
I no longer know this person

I no longer know you
Screaming in a microphone

Please go 

© 2017 B


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With each profound line the words felt colder, the fabric worn thin and frail, the soul aching in the growing emptiness. Nothing is more painful than love grown cold. One's entire being becomes winter. xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


I enjoyed the story in the poem. You gave glimpses of places and thoughts. You allowed the reader to feel the journey and the emotions. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


B

7 Years Ago

The joy of loving a lie
It's magical I tell you

Thank you
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear poet.

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