Hunting Doves - Collab with Einstein Noodle

Mourning  for themselves, it seems, they coo.

Proper load for the killing is one ounce 

of eights. Kill as many as you can; 

they are small.

There can be no turning of cheeks today.

As sheets fly in classy white

Knowledge imparted by the profile

Low keys of feelings saying no

Hurting the words 

Lack of senseless lurking

Within the curious mind

Rides a form of dove

Blinking out the rut 

How far can they go, after all; 

evolution calls the young ones squabs.

They pick at mother's neck for crop milk.

Who ever said this is somehow better?

They whistle through tails when they leave.

Reviews

[Tina H.W.]

I'm floating, flying... This is really special. I liked a lot. Well done both of you :)

[B]

Thank you Tina

[Tina H.W.]

My pleasure! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sounds like one voice...we have been killing the dove here in the states...and really all around the world...peace is becoming an extinct possibility.

well done you two.
j.

[B]

Thanks j
i think killing a dove should be a criminal act

[Paul Bell]

Collabs can be difficult. But this matches in perfectly. Well done both poets.

[B]

Thanks Paul

[Robert Wallace]

Believe it or not this is seems to be an avatar of my daily mindfulness meditation. I explore thoughts just like these. I can identify. A little edgy in a profound way.

[B]

Thanks Robert
Einstein Noodle is pretty cool !!

[Mr.Writer]

Amazing job! This was really well done! Bravo! :)
"Low keys of feelings saying no
Hurting the words"
It also is quite humorous as well! :)
Keep it up! :)

[B]

Didnt intend on humor but i will take that lol
Thank you

[Mr.Writer]

Lol :D Sorry