Roses of May

If she would notice a subtle sound

Shades of sombering red

If he would escape just that thought

In colorful arrays they stay

Some place where lines of linen white

Caved a beauty in summering May

A canvas of lingering lights stained 

Tender to the sight upon given lights

Resonance to a twinkled green

Feeling the love of his life

Longing for guilty tones 

Diminished upon a steering moon

As roses remain to a calm

A cooling color of the night

He walked another spun off road

Of bushes claimed through starry nights

Touching auburn petals once known

Labeled in black and white

If roses do bud in May

Some hearts sit in form

Wondering if he should call her name

Would echoes of life unite

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. He walks another road - Bushes of starry nights ' .. ' .. Touching petals once known - Labeled in black and white .. '

There's an air of fragility and temerity in your words. In spite of the gentle way they're laid out, each couplete delicate and alluring, there could be a retrospective feel to your words, a looking back and wondering if..

[B]

So true thank you for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words shared my friend.
"Should he call her name
Echoes of life unite"
I loved the complete poem and I love the days of Spring. The fresh blooming flowers make us learn. All things can be reborn. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

each couplet has some mwahvelous language and imagery ... but overall, in reading, i am usure of the path of it ... i wanted to read this line: "As for sight upon tender lights" with "thighs" instead of "lights" ;) i would have liked you expanding on the theme in the opening ... your "...somber red" is very creative and its contrast with what we think of in red roses and romance is pronounced, says i!
E.

[B]

Thanks E .... long time

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it has been ... its a big Cafe' isn't it Lingering? impossible to keep up .. but we do try .. hope all is well in your world ... peace and love! :)

[B]

All is well
thanks for asking
we should all get together and write up something together

[Einstein Noodle]

sure .. i enjoy collaborations ... do you have something specific in mind?

[B]

roses lol
i am addicted

[Chris Shaw]

A pensive write here of should I, shan't I
I imagined a man walking a street late at night, wondering about those roses and love. Your posted image of red roses speaks to me of love as well.

Chris

[B]

Thanks Chris :)

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. I wasn't certain of your meaning, but that is what the imagery was giving me.