Dawning Shades

Some sort of touch

Escaping time

Defying logic

Making claims

Through waves

Lost to a case

Left to hope

Should this be

Saying so little

Yet not much

Innocently waiting

Learning of change

Caring for a hold

Riding the unknown

Alone in a world

Guilty of love

Reviews

[.]

There is a lovely, swift flow to this poem, even more brisk than your usual style.....

"Alone in a world, guilty of love". Those words speak volumes of a sweet suffering. One should never be guilty of love. It should be found, embraced and then one shall never be alone.

She still lingers and she still writes. Another lovely poem.

[B]

Thanks doodley
I am still warming up into my own style
Thanks

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is really tough when we love and are not loved back...we wonder if we have done something wrong not to have that love reciprocated...and wonder why we have been put into solitary confinement.
j.

[B]

I love your take on this one
Maybe this soul sits in solitary confinement at will through love
Thanks for your review