Gleams

Imagination

Staring into you

Futures arrive

Early to a learned love

Through a window of hope

Reflections of dreams pass

Walking through glass 

Still waters

A known glee

As colors land a shoulder

Nameless moment of green

Songs by the background

As kind as a glow

Of smiles that stay

Another day spoke

Left sorted 

Heightened emotions beheld

As glares fill a sky

Sliding out of control

A glance

Reviews

[Amy R]

"Staring into you
Futures arrive
Early to a learned love".. oh wow, my fav lines..
This is a very beautiful piece, I adore it.
-Amy

[Isabel]

"Nameless moment of green"... WOW. Loved that particular line :)

[Weeping willow]

Life in moments captured by your words.Love is a tumbled emotion ;-]

[B]

Thank you WW

[Onlyme]

Love sure does make you feel vulnerable and like a little child again, shy and insecure and blushing brightly. When you find someone you really do love. It can take you to new dimensions, closeness and bonds between two souls, two hearts and minds as one.

[B]

true that - its nice to feel this way :)

[Pete]

you've certainly captured love in all its splendor and awe. we become vulnerable as we open up to possibilities. this goes straight to the heart of the matte. pic, title, wording and imagery all work well for me. very uplifting as it shines ... :)

[B]

Thank you Pete

[barleygirl]

This pretty much describes the typical trajectory of my romantic endeavors *wink! wink!* If I start out on cloud nine, I can rest assured I'll be dropping into a guano-loaded cave in time. Your ending hints at warm fuzzy remembrances of a favorite oldie "Landslide" by Fleetwood Mac. I enjoy how your word choices deliver a melodic sound, as well as bringing in the senses (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[B]

Thanks dear margie
sweet!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh how you fooled me Lingering .. i was so in love ..private moments felt through so many great lines of personifications .. even such a well used "..window of hope" reads fresh and new wrapped in the rest of your poem ... love the pic .. love your "..moment of green" .. subtle foreplay .. titillating .." ..colors land on a shoulder" .. lots of brilliance says i! then you did it ... "..glares fill the sky"... "..out of control".... nooooooooooooo! ;( and being man ..... i see the He in this giving that tell all look at someone else .. of course i could be all wrong .. but that's the way i read it .. and i love the way you wrote it! :)
E.

[B]

Not so much lol
Thanks E

[Jibey]

A lovely lingering poem, lol I liked the languid flow of the lines and series of vistas and images of contentment - 'reflections of dreams'. A pleasing word composition.

[B]

Thanks Jibey

[Sami Khalil]

"As kind as a glow
Of smiles that stay
Another day spoke
Left sorted
Heightened emotions beheld"
Very nice and well written.

[B]

Thanks Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

but it is nice to capture the moment

[B]

Thanks Wordman

[wordman]

you`re welcome