Abstract Life

Written for a newspaper competition. Didnt win. Bummer.

Burning a hole inside me,

Like white hot tar,

Glowing a blue corn moon,

A pink and green star.

 

Lighting my life up,

With the glimmer of a bulb,

Hard and intoxious,

I’m already sold.

 

Caterwauling emotion,

Like glitter in wave,

Sweat from the ceiling,

In a 3am rave.

 

Early evening sickness,

And daffodil dew,

My abstract life,

Experienced by few...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

Very nice, I don't know any way you could make it better. It was good. =D