paint me a picture

paint me a picture of you and i
paint me a picture of you loving me
sorry if that's too hard for you to imagine,
it's been so long since we've loved each other
paint me a picture of us when you told me you'd loved me for the first time
paint me a picture of us when first moved in together
it's been awhile since you've been in this apartment with me
paint me a picture of you leaving me through the kitchen door
paint me a picture of you with someone new
because that's too hard for me to imagine

Reviews

[Bear]

A lot of passion in your work, interesting sentence structure with most of the lines starting with "paint me a picture" and kind of haunting at the end for even though you don't have it I couldn't help but repeat the first line in my head for the ending "paint me a picture of you and i". Anything that makes me thing after I read it is a hit with me and your poem has me thinking. Thank you for sharing.

[j.n]

Thank you!