Deep Into Her Eyes

Deep Into Her Eyes

A Poem by PoemRodent
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A triggered moment of write

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Deep Into Her Eyes


Claimed sadness, chained by illusions

Held by hurt and pain its contusions

Hoping to cross a path to happiness

Erasing the memories of her sadness


Timeless artifacts stored inside deep

Her essence cries out tears in weep

Afraid to express she has an attraction

Old scares inside mirroring refraction


He stirred her emotional bond bliss

A feeling she can't and won't dismiss

The smoldering continues to grow

A fire inside beginning to show


Question remains will she accept

Or pass it off as a silent intercept

Romance and passion creep in

Unguarded resistance the sin.


A choice in a matter for her decision

Will she pass the words of division

Or claim the battle is to old to be won

Closing the doors the thought is done.


Robert© - 2014

© 2014 PoemRodent


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Question remains will she accept
Or pass it off as a silent intercept

This is a very captivating poem! Great job!
-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


read all ur poem n this is the best one .......words converts into picture...like it very much

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoemRodent

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.
This another of your brilliant works ! It has that knack of being deep and just takes the reader to another world..your world where your imagination lies ..and the reader just takes a stroll there ! Great job. The emotion reaches me :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoemRodent

10 Years Ago

Thank you Hope, I still struggle with feelings and getting them to paper the way I want so dry firin.. read more

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3 Reviews
Added on April 12, 2014
Last Updated on April 12, 2014
Tags: Fire, passion, decision, romance

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PoemRodent
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I am duality at its best. A traveler and a self proclaimed pin cushion, the voodoo doll everyone enjoys to prick. Yet here I am writing on subjects that eat on my heart, mind and soul. Dark one day, h.. more..

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