The Cold Fact

The Cold Fact

A Poem by PoemRodent
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When you feel it and there is not a soul coming to save you...

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A Cold Fact


I have touched places where others dare

Took hearts from hurting and from despair

Listened to the stories told in deep pain

With nothing in my heart to ever gain


I felt your feelings surround your cries

I been in your dark areas where time lies

Like computer code thoughts stream

Your visually traumatic a horror dream


What of this did I gather from my own hand

Solitude, rebuttal and a empty glass of sand

A longing to be loved, a place to call home

Instead I'm left walking in silence I roam


My spirit left broken a madness in me

With no one staying they all up and flee

Now I am alone, a darkness I shall seat

Tears flowing down, Landing at my feet


The clock of life has begun to slowly tick

Speeding the process of wither, I'm sick

Soon I cry it shall all be said and done

Withered away by a loves darkest sun.


Robert© - 2014

© 2014 PoemRodent


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I know this poem. I told people I did most of the deadly seven sins. Maybe if I'm lucky. Room for me in Purgatory Inn. 15 years in the Army and 40 countries. Hard to walk the safe and godly line. I like the honest and truthfulness of the words. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
' Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoemRodent

10 Years Ago

Again the encouragement is welcomed. Thanks for reviewing this piece, stay tuned I am not nearly fin.. read more



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I know this poem. I told people I did most of the deadly seven sins. Maybe if I'm lucky. Room for me in Purgatory Inn. 15 years in the Army and 40 countries. Hard to walk the safe and godly line. I like the honest and truthfulness of the words. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
' Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoemRodent

10 Years Ago

Again the encouragement is welcomed. Thanks for reviewing this piece, stay tuned I am not nearly fin.. read more

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Added on April 30, 2014
Last Updated on April 30, 2014
Tags: Love, Withering, Darkness, Time, growing Old, Death

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I am duality at its best. A traveler and a self proclaimed pin cushion, the voodoo doll everyone enjoys to prick. Yet here I am writing on subjects that eat on my heart, mind and soul. Dark one day, h.. more..

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