Sunset Dreams

Never stop dreaming.

 Whimpers in the distance 

Become close and personal 

In their stance,

Seeking no denial. 

Loud is the cry,

And long is the beat.

Descending from a well-used sky

Are sunset dreams. 

Fruition pursues to claim 

The perfect picture to capture.

A goal in which to aim,

A precious allure.

A fragrant in the nostril 

Strong and sweet. 

A deeply planted will

In sunset dreams. 

The act of believing,

The need of the unknown. 

The journey for the seeing,

The secret shown.

Far above, 

Yet within reach.

Descending into the spirit with love 

Are sunset dreams.

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

well written with a good flow line by line, i like the moment expression inside your poem :)

keep writing