Deep in the Sea

Deep in the Sea

 

Deep in the sea,

A treasure awaits

Of what’s to be.

 

A coil of gold

Desiring to be found�"

To be owned.

 

Deep in the sea

Of water blue,

Something needs to be freed.

 

Waiting… waiting…

To be recognized for its worth,

For time’s a wasting.

 

Deep in the sea,

It longs for air,

To finally breathe.

 

Rise up, O dream of mine,

Make your way to the surface,

In this thing called Time.

 

Deep in the sea,

A treasure awaits

Deep in the heart of me.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Soft and pleasant to read. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading and leaving your review.

[Kasey M.C.]

This is a beautiful poem and I enjoyed reading this. It made me believed that I was really swimming in the deep blue sea but I was really swimming in your heart. I love the tiwist at the end. Please keep on writing.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you very much.

[BL]

Great twist at the end, I like this very much

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

My favorite place is the sea. I like the way you gave thoughts and memories to the ocean.
"Rise up, O dream of mine,
Make your way to the surface,
In this thing called Time."
The poem had the feel of dreams and hope. I like the ending dear Melinda to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[wordman]

touching write melinda,i enjoyed the poem

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you very much.

[Shannon]

Oh, I really like the way you tied this up in the end.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you very much.