I Wanna Go

I Wanna Go

 

To smell the flowers,

To look up at the stars,

To be caught in a rain shower.

 

Down the highway

I wanna go.

In search of a beautiful day.

 

Wind in my hair,

Sunshine kissing my face.

I wanna go anywhere.

 

To taste what’s it like

To be free

To do the things I write.

 

With a laugh in my throat,

And joy in my heart,

I wanna go.

 

A simple thing,

A tickle in the heart.

A whisper of angel wings.

 

As life’s passion unfolds,

Take me along.

I wanna go.

Reviews

[KWP]

nice ... even nicer to remember that it is all waiting for us, all we have to do is go ... X

[Timothy Ryan]

A simple poem, with good imagery and a feeling everyone can relate to. You certainly get your message across. To me, if you indulge more with lines like "Sunshine kissing my face" and "A whisper of angel wings" your writing could be even better. Right now, the message gets across just fine. But if the whole thing had lines like those, it would take everything to the next level. Just a thought. Thanks for sharing with us all.

[wordman]

sounds like a sweet trip,beautiful imagery

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by and reading my thoughts.

[GalaxyGhost]

This is a wonderful poem that has a peacefulness to it! I love how it has a sweetness to it that is just spectacular in its own way!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by and reading my thoughts.

[Valentine]

How many of us feel as age creeps up on us. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Coyote Poetry]

The words filled with positive thoughts and wishes.
"A simple thing,
A tickle in the heart.
A whisper of angel wings."
The words soft and powerful. I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear Melinda.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by and reading my thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melissa.