"Fallen Angel"

Fallen angel don't you cry

broken wings

won't let you fly.

 

Fallen angel of the night

heavens come 

to make things right.

  

Fallen angel don't you sigh

I'll be forever

by your side.

 

Fallen angel cry no more

the world is yours

till heavens door.

 

 

copyright © Night.2013 

 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

This rings of unconditional love to my ear...like the love a parent has for a child. Like, no matter what, no matter how the child has "fallen", the parent will always be by the child's side, offering hope and encouragement. Whether that was your intention or not, I got a lot of depth and meaning from this piece, and I thank you so much for sharing it with us.

-kimmer

[Night]

...you are exactly right my friend, in this case, the parent being God...the fallen angel: well, that would be us. Thank you for reading me.:)

[KAOlmsted]

My absolute pleasure.

[Enid Blake]

It sounds like a lullaby, very soothing :)

[Night]

...yea now that you mention it, it kinda does huh....lol. Thanks so much for reading my stuff...:)

[Ratnroll]

Lovely!

[Night]

...thank you.:)

[Sirius King]

great flow!

nice write

[Night]

...thank you my friend.

[Sirius King]

ur welcome :-)

[gabrielle]

i hummed the words as i read it..like a lullaby. the flow is just terrific. i like IT

[Night]

...thank you very much.:)

[KatDarkness]

Beautiful, and the picture matches perfectly. Great poetry! :)

[Night]

...my friend, thank you.:)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Salvation in the arms of Love .. beautiful thoughts ..


Jazzy x

[Night]

Good morning Jazz...um, morning for me...lol. You read this perfectly.:)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Oh, yes tis 2 PM for me .. just having lunch .. Good Afternoon ! :)

[Night]

...nice, enjoy this day well..."Blue Skies".:)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

:)................

[quinfinn]

i love this take on fallen angels, yours is expressive and sweet to a fault! this is a charming write.

[Night]

...thank you very much.:)

[quinfinn]

thank you, poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such sentimental and endearing words.

[Night]

...thank you kind sir.:)