Photograph

As you go,

i think of

all the times you smile,

you are beautiful

and i look ahead

at the times i'll need this

to rout the insufficient days

without you...

Reviews

[Lau Thiam Kok]

It is a short and sweet poem indeed. I like this phrase especially,

"to rout the insufficient days"

However, "you are beautiful", if you can injet some depth into this phrase that will be sweeter.

Thank you for sharing.