Submissive (If It Pleases You)

powerful trying times :

the physical prowess of lions

anticipating an unassuming kill

he is most-hardened

a would-be Buddhist

less than completely / alrtuistic

a cultured body

indelibly characteristic of saisfaction

full of want

find myself in Kama Sutra prayers

between unsurprise and need

"if it pleases you"

i will star in this lust's lifestyle

unfold my imagination / like philosophies of functions

of fevers

for you to prey on my tightly fitted skin

"if it pleases you"

perfection / in denim

i will be lowly to your omniscent stiff

situate my passion's mouth / with gun oil

motivate its pulsating portent

invent new longings

"if it pleases you"

please me...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

All the aspects of this poem are wonderful. I feel a little eroticism in this one...:)..............

[Engulfed in Flames]

awesome....I like your style and language

[Tai Chi Italy]

Great write. Highly erotic on many levels. No smut either PF! thanks for sharing. Smiling at your tight skin line....Tai