Right vs. Wrong

Came to me, when a "friend" was telling me how i should live my life and how they thought some of the things i did were "loser-ish"..Well this is my response to them...I tried to make it a poem...could be or just might be a rant...whatever you feel from i

Tell me what's right and tell me what's wrong
Cuz lately it seems like nothing is going right
Feels as if I'm just putting up a fight
It could be a fight with myself
or
Maybe a fight with society

Everyones Denying things
Many people take, while the other half give
Many people lie, while the other half keep it real
I wish many people would just know how I feel

Like why I keep trying to do my best
How I wish I could be better than all the rest
Well maybe not better
But you know what I mean
I'm trying as best as I can to keep this clean
I don't wanna get carried away
And just start cussin about
Cuz when I get really pissed, mad, alone, it just all seems to start pouring out

But right now honestly life is a B-I-T-C-H
I'm just tryin to resist
Into given into temptation
And telling myself I can't make it
It's a strong sensation
That's flowing through my bones
And I just can't seem to let it go
But I'm here to let myself kno

That CHANGE is sometimes for the Better
No matter the type of weather
I gotta keep my head up high and always to the sky
And FxxK with others say
Cuz this aint their life
So I'm stoppin with the strife
And I'm about to just live my Life to the Fullest
Cuz honestly know one really knos

What's Right vs. Wrong............??

Author's Note

Feedback would be nice....

Reviews

[Nyida Strong]

A poetic rant.. interesting though not exactly something I come across often. Rants like this one often come off as being disjointed, which sadly happened here. I'm not entirely sure what the rant is about... and loosing the reader is not a primary goal.

N. Strong