Hidden

This is inspired by "903" by Emily Dickinson. I hope you enjoy!

I hide myself in shadows dark

 

That dance with candle flame.

 

You unsuspecting look at me,

 

And see just the darkness.

 

I hide myself in shadows dark

 

That hide themselves away,

 

You unsuspecting feel my breath

 

That smells like emptyness.

 

 

Author's Note

Please enjoy!

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is absolutely lovely!!.Your words have such feeling:)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much! I enjoyed your poems too!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well you are welcome my friend:)

[fireblossom]

Lovely and full of life. I saw the way the candle flickered and made the room look like a dance. Well written PPP.

Yours truly

FB

[Lydia Shutter]

Powerfully emotional words.....breath smelling like emptiness...wow! Liked it, but it was difficult to read with the lines going through your words. Lydi**

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for reading! I will defenitly fix this!

[PoetryPenPal]

I hope it is easier to read now!

[Lydia Shutter]

Absolutely.....but I copied and pasted it into a blank document so I could read it....I enlarged the font and took out the lines.

[PoetryPenPal]

Wooo! I'm glad you liked it that much!

[Sami Khalil]

A good write...Thank you for penning...:).................

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................