Life in 22 Phrases

Work.

Stress.

Kids.

Mess.

Money.

Spent.

People.

Met.

Tears.

Loss.

Careers.

Boss.

Singing.

Rain.

Cringing.

Pain.

A year.

A day,

Gone away.

Fear.

Breath.

Death.

 

 

Author's Note

Please enjoy!

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

I can't believe you are 12 years old. This is fabulous. It's very creative and insightful.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much!

[katnisscat]

I'm jealous. You are really a good writer. Keep at it! I really like this piece. It's different. Nice write.

[PoetryPenPal]

You don't have to be jealous you're good writer too! Thank you for this sweet review.

[Maddi Snowden]

I like it! I feel as though it is easy to relate to. For someone so young, you have a lot of potential to grow as an author and poet. This is a really great place to start and grow from. Well done!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks a lot!

[R. L. Hill]

You carry a deep insight about you for one of such a young age. Life is a circle and no matter how many interpretations of each of these lines, we have experienced them all. Bravo

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks a bunch pal!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well my little poetry pal this was very insightful.You have written this very well :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[prodicallife]

Wwoowww!!

A very different style.

I much enjoyed it how you took us through an entire scenario with one word phrases.

Thanks for sharing a great write.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much!

[prodicallife]

You are welcome dear writer.

Prodical

[Praveeta]

An unusual but interesting piece.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for reading and this nice review!

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome dear friend.

[Maddy]

Very simplistic but yet it manages to bring across each idea. Shows a little bit of the uglier side of life. Not a type of writing I would normally expect from you considering how bubbly you are. A very interesting read though. I quite enjoyed it.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you Maddy! You'd be surprised how evil I can get!

[Maddy]

I'm sure I would :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Pretty direct and honest flow of words. Need a few fun words too. All work, no play make Johnnie a boring boy. I enjoyed the excellent flow of words. Thank you.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for your thoughtful review!