Fear

Fear

A Poem by PoetryPenPal

Passion used in evil ways,

Disguised three hundred and sixty-five days.

A song that hums an evil tune,

Words that cause evil ruin.

Words that jump across the page,

To hide away from evil's rage.

Darkness flows like a waterfall

I run towards the light down the hall.

I hear a chuckle, an evil laugh

As I go down darkness's path.

Fear lives only in your dreams

Where nothing is as it seems.

Now I wake up, and take a deep breath

And no longer fear my imminent death.

© 2014 PoetryPenPal


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This may be my favorite yet! It is haunting and powerful. Great Job! I think we should talk about using it within the World of Angora storyline!

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
I enjoyed the poem. A nice ride into a scary dream and place than being awoke safe and sound in your bed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Very very very good! I love it! You have captured the essence of becoming fearful of death for sure!

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much buddy!
LadyAnn68

10 Years Ago

Check out my new or latest poem..."Recovery is not a Compromise" if you get time?
PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Of course!
Excellent poem on fear...Pen on without fear...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
This is most excellent my little penpal.The lines and rhymes are perfect:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


PoetryPenPal

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Vidya.

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Added on March 9, 2014
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