Dry Eyes

Thank you StrixNebulosa for your input. I changed the title just a bit.

Pain,

A numbness.

Cold,

Ice cold.

Silent,

But so loud.

It hurts,

But I can't stay away.

I cry,

Dry tears.

I wipe,

Wet cheeks.

It takes me,

Away...

Author's Note

Please enjoy!

Reviews

[StrixNebulosa]

Ive a saying... "pain is simply a rich feeling, its kin to dark chocolate"... its either completely understood or weirds people out. Your write here has a strength in it that is bold and complex for such a short pen... that takes talent. For your title question Id choose "arid eyes"

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you for your input!

[PoetryPenPal]

I am using your title. I just changed it to dry eyes.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words. I could feel the disappointment in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much for reading Coyote!

[icelandicblue]

Pain is a complex feeling filled with many emotions. It is both universal and personal. You've done a great job of capturing that here.

[PoetryPenPal]

I agree. Thanks alot for reading and reviewing!