Lost

Silence richettes

Off the padded walls,

Lost in my thoughts

'Bout ready to fall.

Humming a tune,

Not able to dance,

Someone snap me

Out of this trance.

Where's that kite going?

Is it even real?

I should probly go catch it,

But what's the big deal?

Spinning in circles

Too dizzy to stop.

Am I really crazy

Or really  not?

I've been in this daze 

For quite a long while

And there's a bit of wheezing

In my sigh.

My lips are chaped

And my eyes bloodshot,

And this white jacket

Makes me hot.

No tears can drip

Out of my eyes

Even though I wish

I could cry.

Is this a deam

Or reality,

A vacant room

With just me.

My mind is racing

With my frightened thoughts,

I'm falling under

It can't be fought.

When you're lost

It's hard to be found

So I keep falling

And hit the ground.  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true.
"When you're lost
It's hard to be found
So I keep falling
And hit the ground. "
Hard to catch a falling star. The good description create thoughts and reaction. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

Falling stars often fall too fast for anyone to notice. It can drive people crazy. Thank you for the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and you are welcome.

[PoetryPenPal]

:-)...............

[LadyAnn68]

Wow...scary...I think you have certainly captured the essence of what people fear in the padded cell in the white coat. But I am not sure about the tears flowing or not...that is something to think about...maybe crazy people can't cry..that may be why they are crazy???? What a thought...Good write

[PoetryPenPal]

People with no feeling and a black heart are crazy. No tears to me means that they are all cried out, not that they are crazy. Thank you for the great review friend! :-)

[Lexi]

This describes how I feel a lot lately, so I can relate and just love it. Its like the thoughts I couldn't say are put on paper. There are a few grammatical errors but I wasn't sure if it was intentional or not, either way you did quite lovely :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you very much. I will check out the grammatical errors. I'm very glad you enjoyed it!