A Lost Child

Does anyone understand the life of a depressed person. I do.

Image this...
You were born an accident. Your parents say it wasn't meant to happen but it was love at first sight. You believe them until there's those moments when you just can't.

3 more sisters are brought into your life. You try to be happy for each new child, but the more children the less attention you get.

By age 12 you are babysitting them and cooking meals. No money, no friends, no love. You're blamed for every mistake made.

You can't handle the pressure. You have an outburst and your parents think your mad. You feel alone and lost in the world.

You just want to be done. But you can't. You can't give up. You believe that the point and creation of you was to make a difference in the world. To change everything.

You keep hope and live life. You may be lost and alone for a short time, but not forever.

After all my friend... FOREVER IS A LONG TIME

Reviews

[Salem Gray]

You raise some great points here. I think you make some interesting statements and have a very casual way of saying them, in a good way. I don't get how this is quite a story, though. There's so much expanding that could be done, again, in a good way! Good job, regardless.

[BubblegumBallerina]

This story is breathtaking, literally BREATH TAKING
i can now imagine what life would be like and thats the main point of a story. To captivate the reader and give them the feeling of being in that position. I can literally feel the sadness rush through me.BRAVO!!!

[Kass]

Thank you! I am so proud to have a meaning. Please feel free to enjoy other tales of mine.

[Inject Positivity]

You have simply awed me.....Such a sad tone behind this one, i feel its a real story....Very courageous write....I loved the last line most....Clap! Clap!......I loved the message you have given through this story.....

[Kass]

Thank you! It is so nice to hear some kind words in such a dark place!