From Within

The rain streamed down my cheek

as it transformed my tears into a masked disguise.

Its composition, ambiguous in nature, 

meaning more than my words could say. 

Within every expulsion, my worries dissipated, 

dismissing its own sinister triumph.

Racing pigments of what once held true danced around in my memory,

taunting me.

Lacking distinction, I called out,

crumbling into pieces,

unaware of what had become of me.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[Acer]

Sounds good.

[soliloquy]

You are a poet! This sounds great. I had to read it 3x to get enough meaning out of it to be able to comment. I like that.

[PolaroidRaid]

Haha Thanks so much!

[soliloquy]

The pic was very appropriate too....its adds to the meaning. You are pretty good!

[PolaroidRaid]

Thank you, so are you!

[soliloquy]

Hey...i only read what i like.

[Heromen Selena]

It takes us a while to realize that something is wrong with ourselves until it reflects on the out side of us. Great job.

[PolaroidRaid]

Thank you!