Crimson Memories

Melted diamonds streaming down my cheeks

awakening my fears.

Silent screaming

ripping through reality.

Crimson memories,

desperate to be forgotten.

What was once so effortlessly painstaking

grabbed hold of my everlasting identity.

Terrified of the past,

terrified of the future.

Reviews

[soliloquy]

Strong intensity and emotion....well done.

[PolaroidRaid]

Thank you!

[☯]

This piece is just amazing, the words and similes fit nicely together with the idea of it. It's as if a reoccurring nightmare that you can never get rid of, great write :)

[Heromen Selena]

Sometimes our past keeps us from trying new things or the same things again because of what happened the first time. You captured the feeling very well. Nice job.

[PolaroidRaid]

Thank you :)