Sweet dance

A Poem by Ponderer Panda

When you had died, I swear you made this sweet dance with your expression as you slipped into oblivion, maybe it was just my mind playing tricks on me, but I was absolutely sure something lovely took hold of your soul.

© 2014 Ponderer Panda

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Shapirta

wow. great poem! has a deep message. very descriptive and paints a vivid picture in my mind! i can't wait to your other writings in the future! great job! also, can you do me a favor and review 'the silver necklace'? i want to know what others think of it. any constructive criticism is totally open! thanks, and great job again on the poem.

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Thank you, Of course I will.

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Shapirta

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Of course I will.

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Added on September 7, 2014
Last Updated on September 7, 2014
Tags: Death, Dancing, Love, Oblivion

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Ponderer Panda

Hephzibah, GA

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I am 16 years old, I am male. I am self aware of the world and am prepared to take in new information. I always try to add to my knowledge, and once my emotions take over my mind, I typically write .. more..

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