Darkness

A girl
Lay
In her room
On her bed

She was alone
And sad
Oh
So
Sad

The darkness
Of the night
Surrounded her

She was afraid
Of the dark
When she was younger
But now
Sadness
Filled her
She had
No place
For fear

As she lay
In her bed
In the dark
Weeping
Silent tears
In her sleep
The darkness
Reached out
And
Held
Her
Hand.

Reviews

[Anjali]

I'm getting a sense of empowerment and a sense of despair and it's beautiful.. the way you've expressed yourself in few words, it's beautiful! I absolutely loved it.

[siobhan]

I liked this, I like the layout, the emotion and the strength I am getting from this one. Keep going!