Her beauty is a curse

Hey girl! Take a ride with me

And he showed her the world of hedonism.

Hey girl! I want you to be my date

And he dumped her next day after f*****g that night.

Hey girl! I really love the way you are

And he called her s**t at back.

Hey girl! You are so beautiful

And he got his own physical pleasure.

Hey girl! I really loved the night spent with you

And next day he was found committed with someone else.

Hey girl! You’re dressed so well

And it took a minute for him to leave her undressed.

Hey girl! You ask yourself who you are.

I’m Miss Nobody whose feelings are raped everywhere.

Hey girl! You are beautiful.

But your beauty is a curse that left you nowhere.

Reviews

[Avinash]

When everyone is able to fool you..it means somewhere you lost the ability to see the truth. The power to distinguish between truth and lies. Others (Specially Boys) can misguide you when you are not able to honestly look into the mirror and tell yourself who you are...and you need others point of view to convince yourself.
And Beauty is soul not the body......

[writer in trial]

Yeah right Avinash. Agreed :)
Thanks a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

It is happenning all over the world unfortunately where girls are being treated like a piece of meat instead as a lady or a soul...Excellent one...:)

[writer in trial]

You are right Sami. I hope that people should understand this.
Thanks Dear for the comment. :)
tc:)

[Sami Khalil]

So true. You are welcome...:)

[Onku Ghosh]

good write!!! Many men use girls, who are vulnerable, this way.Beauty can become a curse sometimes.

[writer in trial]

Agreed
Thanks :)

[zainul]

Crude yet truthful expression.
I would rather say that it is the vicious cycle of girls.
The society dedicate them for the pleasure of men,the girls themselves think that they are for the pleasure of men and thus tend to neglect to take proper education and opportunities of their own empowerment.
Sometimes,they fall victim to the lust of men by themselves and suffer repeatedly.
I understand you wrote this piece from your own experience and thus deserve appreciation.

[writer in trial]

Thanks a lot :)
You nailed it right :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.:)

[Kyle J. Lawson]

Not bad. I thought a few parts weren't fluid. But maybe you made it like that on purpose. Other than that, you well expressed a young woman or woman who is tormented by her own physical attraction. Decent piece. :)

[writer in trial]

Thanks a lot dear :)
Actually my English isn't that good. So i am trying to work on that:)
read moreThanks a lot dear :)
Actually my English isn't that good. So i am trying to work on that:)
I am glad you loved it :)

[Kyle J. Lawson]

Ohh okay, it was still good though. :)

[writer in trial]

thanks :)

[Kyle J. Lawson]

You're welcome. :)