Mirror And Bed

Mirror And Bed

A Poem by writer in trial

Again the same day

Morning rays make her awake

Her make ups are spread

Hairs are opened

Eyes are sunken

Tears are coagulated

The blue sky will turn black soon

She puts her dress

And she’s ready to impress

All she needs some bucks

To keep her alive

She has nowhere to go

Nobody to know

Just picked by someone

And dumped no less than gutter

Where clock never ticks

And life never change

Her day begins and end

With mirror and bed

 

© 2013 writer in trial


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The life this girl leads is terrible.Just for the sake of some cash she ha s to sell her body.THere cannot be a greater curse than this. 'Her day begins and ends/ with mirror and bed.' - very well said.A lovely poem written with feeling.MY poem ''The painted girl' is written on more or less the same lines.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writer in trial

10 Years Ago

Thanks friend :)
Yeah i was about to write that when i read your poem. That's why i feel the p.. read more



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The life this girl leads is terrible.Just for the sake of some cash she ha s to sell her body.THere cannot be a greater curse than this. 'Her day begins and ends/ with mirror and bed.' - very well said.A lovely poem written with feeling.MY poem ''The painted girl' is written on more or less the same lines.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writer in trial

10 Years Ago

Thanks friend :)
Yeah i was about to write that when i read your poem. That's why i feel the p.. read more
Very nice! cool piece :) well written, enjoyed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writer in trial

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Dear :)
A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writer in trial

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Dear :)
I am glad you like it :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

MY pleasure...:)

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Added on July 9, 2013
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Tags: Depression, prostitution, loneliness, pain

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writer in trial

Bangalore, KARNATAKA, India



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