You

Another try...

You

Consume my thoughts, fill my heart

Make me feel like I can do anything.

You

Are more dedicated to those you love

Than I could ever be.

You

Deserve more love than I could ever give

I'll do my best to give you what I have.

You

Trust me with who you really are

Let me hold you when you cry

You

Are my love

I hope to never lose you.

Reviews

[CT]

This is a really good poem. It's simple, not elaborate, but it works for what it is. It doesn't try hard to be something it's not, which is a common downfall of many of the poems on the site. It's good. Keep writin'.

[Sophster300]

Love it! :)