Fallen Angel.

Fallen Angel.

A Poem by Sami Geiger

 She has brown eyes.
She has the cutest blond curly hair.
She has the tiniest little pink toes. 
She has the little smirk.
She's the only thing in life that I wanted.
She is what I call my fallen Angel. 
She is Carly Ann.

© 2012 Sami Geiger


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sounds like a sweet baby.....that you somehow lost???? you did a good job of describing her...she has the tiniest little pink toes....

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm not sure your intention here. I feel like the title tells me something I should know, but when I read the poem I get a picture that is very clear and yet tells nothing beyond the superficial. Kinda like small talk at church... Neat distraction and a fresh tone of youth to it.
Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Girl

11 Years Ago

I agree 100%

A tad bit confusing. A title change would fix it. She sounds like your chi.. read more

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Sami Geiger
Sami Geiger

Bluffton, OH



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I'm just one of those small town girls with big dreams. I know who I want to spend the rest of my life with. And I tell him everyday(: more..

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