Step Out the Threshold.

Step Out the Threshold.

A Poem by Priyanka Natesh

Walk,

Out of home

Out of certainty

On your own

 

Brace,

The vengeance

The crudeness

All alone

 

Find,

The soul

The life

You own

 

Enjoy,

The quiet

The peace

You deserve

 

Kiss,

Love

Surrender

Together.

© 2013 Priyanka Natesh


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this is full of great feeling and peace great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A amazing poem. The few words create a powerful poem with so much hope and possibility. I like the last four words.
"Kiss,
Love
Surrender
Together. "
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unorthodox at its best :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah this is really inspirational:) so nice and gives a wonderful feeling after reading it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work. This is inspirational.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way you've written this too. Beautiful flow and a lovely optimistic ending to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite intriguing. Interesting writing scheme.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good show..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Priyanka Natesh
Priyanka Natesh

Hyderabad, India



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Hello there! I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me.. more..

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