Crumbs in a Giant's Pocket.

Just another possibility!

     In an immeasurable space,
            in a live blue ball,
               on a chunk of land,
                  in a small country,
                     in a tiny locality,
                        as a minute speck,
                             I reside.

                            Should this living spot
      have anything to worry?
     This life, I own,
                       I enjoy, I complete.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You view on life is logically in this poem. What is the worth of one human being? I like the story of when a beggar came to the door. The kid woman offer food and a place to stay warm. She had little. Her heart gave with kindness and no regret. The man was Jesus. He blessed her life and she never lack anything again. Thank you for a excellent poem. Made old Coyote think.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Cool yaa..!!!!! Lovely words..!!!!

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the brevity of this piece. It accents the flow and forces the reader to seek a deeper meaning for the poem. We should all take a moment to view ourselves in this way for some fail to realize that we are just a tiny piece of a huge machine. All that we should seek is simple serenity. Very well penned

[AshleeKayann]

It's simple. Not too wordy, but still it contains depth. Curiously, is there a reason you chose the structure? I like it, but it's unlike anything I've ever attempted to do. Intriguing. I enjoyed this :)

[Gitana Deneff]

love the structure

[Sakib]

Interesting pattern. It has deep meanings. Nicely written. I enjoyed it.

[Kathryn]

I love it - really intriguing. I love how you first belittle your life, before showing its true worth in those last four lines. I loved it, well done :)

[Jeremy Baker]

I like the answer to this question - all life has value. Great writing!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the structure and very deep :)