Love Psalm

SH2 title.

It's the strangest feeling when
you don't love anyone at all
All plateaus of platonic adoration
never felt more inviting
I want to be alone from now on

The romance you seek died long ago
I'll surf this beach; I'll suffer this hangover
All through my own intuition
and not through the will of others
I'll find my own place in this damn world

Let this psalm be written
the unending ink traced into the earth
rising through the stress and anxiety
Because what is really left
when all the turmoil has faded away?

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

It's the strangest feeling when
you don't love anyone at all -- these lines truly brought tears to my eyes. So sad...I've been here...maybe I'm here now, I'm not sure.

I can relate to the sentiment and the contextual concept of this one. The last stanza was stellar; that first line really gripped me and held on tightly until the end. Well done.

[Lexi Villanueva]

100

[Lexi Villanueva]

The romance you seek
Died long ago-this is
My favorite stanza of all
-100

[s y e]

Awwww, this was such an emotional write, you had some lines that totally brought me to tears. This is a write that a lot of people could relate to. I know some who could, well done, dude. Amazing.

~ Noodle

[Graveyardfuck]

I hate this feeling. It sits in my gut like bad cafeteria food. And it makes me want to claw my skin off. It makes me feel...empty.

[chaotic katie]

another amazing piece! fantastic job!

[inkofme]

Nice! You are a great Poet!:)

[The Girl That Let You G..]

Its definatly a strange feeling to not be loving someone at all....but it can also be a good thing in a way
Magnificent write

[KeelyJane]

I love it. It is so filled with emotion. You captivated me with your word choice and then embodied me with your passion. Excellent write. Thank you for sharing

[Kristin]

There are emotions literally pouring out of this write! Loved it!! The question at the end really summed it up and leaves the reader thinking! Keep writing!

[William C Jones III]

I'm speechless. The emotion in this poem should touch a person who's been down this road of thinking. Nicely done!