The Photographs-Final

The Photographs-Final

A Poem by Mel Mel
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Pushed myself to revise something...*proud*

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He picked her for her sad eyes
That, and he knew her well.

The other model had skipped out.
He needed help, she gave it.

The four weeks apart made it...
Interesting; charged.

The locked door between them
And the tiny world of the single shower 
Provoked and pushed them.

Look up, up into the water
Get it in your eyes, let me see anguish
For then, it was pretend.

He moved to get a better angle
Improved lighting on an object.

Look like you're screaming
Your heart is broken
For the moment, it was fake.

How could she know?
Later, the same emotions,
So easily conjured.

Like you want to escape, or die
Curl into a ball, let the water burn you
It was so effortless, flawless then.

The camera flashed, preserving his
Concept of suffering in time forever
Channeled through her
A prop in the shower

A doll that he moved
To tears, or just scalding water.
Predicted emotions, dangerous
And bigger than both of them

Flood through them,
And leave them clean.

© 2011 Mel Mel


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Added on October 19, 2011
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Mel Mel
Mel Mel

Salem, NH



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