Fake

You lie. You cheat. You steal.

You're a mess and need to stop.

You're a fake and I hate yu for it.

You're a bad influence on me and I know it.

I should get awy from you before I'm a fake too.

But I love you too much. I can't stay away.

Maybe I can make you better...

Maybe I can help you...

Author's Note

Idk. It's kinda messed up. I was upset like I usually am when I write.

Reviews

[Colleen a Bean]

I like it but in your third line you forgot the o in you and in your 5th line u put awy instead of away just thought I would mention it otherwise I love it :)

[Fallen Angel]

Yea.. I noticed that.. Just never felt like changing it.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol awh ok well it's fine either way

[SilentDreamer]

I like it, even if it is slightly (only slightly :) ) messed up. i like it though. It's very honest. Nice job.

[Jenny Ge]

It's pretty good. I think it could have been developed more, but it definately expresses how you feel, and you get a clear message across. There is even a [unique] rhythm.
Keep it up!