I'm Ok

I’m Ok

Today I got good news

Your back with your ex girlfriend

I didn’t find out by you

Because you don’t have the guts

Friends thought I would be a wreck

But I’m not

I’m ok.

Its better this way

I can finally live without your pain

You taught me to never hurt anyone

This adventure you put me through

Will never be forgotten

But I am proud to say

That I can walk away

Without you and the heartache

My days are brighter

And I’m much happier

Thank you for the lessons

Worries, heartaches, and fears

Were all for nothing

Because without you

I can breathe again

And I can walk and say

I’m ok.

Reviews

[Gravedigger]

I'm glad that it doesn't affect you too deeply, because that can really destroy a person inside out. Well done.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Dani California]

Yay! Yes, you are ok...

Closure. That's what that is.. closure.
I love it when that happens because it
makes it so much easier to move forward..
it makes us realize .... "I'm ok"

Love it! Love it!
Now it's time to do YOU! :)

[W.Piggy]

Woah. this is such a beautiful poem. :) thank you for giving me a request i'm truly sorry i haven't been doing anything, i've been really busy. great poem. your poems are always great to read, so magical. :) you're really talented at writing seriously. I feel so bad compared to you. hehe. keep it up. :)

W.Piggy
p.s. i'm glad you're okay and so strong. :) hehe.

[lauren emily]

This is really great! You did an awesome job with this. Thanks for sharing =)

~Lauren

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

Wonderfully written!
-Marv

[JadedSparrow]

"This adventure you put me through
Will never be forgotten
But I am proud to say
That I can walk away."

I love this set of lines. This hit closer to home than I care to admit. I wish I was as strong as you. The poem was beautifully written, and speaks of a desire and ability to move past the pitfalls in life. Very well done...

[Adela Muresan]

Great poem � full of positive energy and reflecting intelligence.
I likes the fact that you pointed out the importance of learning form suffering: ,,You taught me to never hurt anyone,,.

A.M.