A Part Of Me Missing

A Part Of Me Missing
Everything is going great
In my life right now
But there’s one thing that I hide
And I can’t tell no one how I feel
Because I lock it inside my heart
But truth is I want you here..
I don’t know why its so hard to see
Through my starry eyes
I guess the smile fools everyone
I live happy and I’m thankful
But you being there makes me cry
I just want to be able to run to you
When everything goes wrong
I want to lean on you
When I have a long day at work
I want to lose myself in your kiss
And focus on you and I
I want to sleep with you at night
And wake up in your arms
I don’t want to live without you
I need you to come and take that feeling away
The area where it hurts the most
Just take the pain with your lips
And tell me you love me..
There’s a big part of me missing
And its been gone for so long
That part is you..

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

I enjoy your admission of missing a loved one. Needing that love one like most of us do. This piece is another one of your pure in your face poems. You tell it like it is and we as the readers has no guessing. We can enjoy your art form at its best.

[deeps]

Such a heartfelt write here
I can redally feel the emotion in this write.
Well expressed.

[Jaded rose]

I loved this piece. This is what I have felt and feel even now. Thank you for sharing.

[lindsay]

I just went through rollercoaster of emotions. What a heartfelt write, amazing job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

To me love is the ultimate piece of the puzzle so no matter what you have there is always a void without love. A truly heartfelt piece of writing.

[Orlando Murcia]

Very Beautiful Kylie

So sad yet hurtful
waiting for that beloved kiss

Nice work sweetheart!

Orlando M