Keep Falling

Just a poem..

Keep Falling
I’ve been watching myself
Fade away into the mist
Fears over come me
And this feeling never ends
I just want a pair of arms
That can hold this heart
To bring me closer
And let me fall into them
I’m tired of hitting the ground
But every time I do
I’m still breathing
And I just help myself back up
I’m scared to do it again
I think it would be the last
Because I don’t think
I have the strength to get up again..

Reviews

[sadjgrey]

ill like this one alot

[deeps]

I like this, it's very well expressed and written!

[Bud]

It seems you have found the words I have been looking for these past couple of days. Even in your short poems, you still ring true with your Signature Style. Most Excellent piece of expressive art!

[W.Piggy]

[Hayley]

Very nice, I like it.