Falling Deeply

Falling Deeply

I try so hard to not miss you

I fight it with myself everyday

Because I don’t want to feel sad

But missing you makes me smile

While my heart aches for you

Being in your arms is a different feeling

It lifts me up to the highest mountain

And there’s just no way I can fall

When I have you holding me

We don’t see each other a lot

But at least your there each day

I love knowing your always going to be around

I can finally count on someone

I have strong hope for us

We have stuff to work out, but who doesn’t

It’s a long road ahead of us both

But as long as we have each other

We can make it without fail

And when no one else believes

We do with everything we have

We’re going to have rough times

But we’re also going to have great moments

And the memories have already started

You’ve done so much more than anyone else

Just by the words you say to me

The way you kiss my lips

And you hold me so tight

To let me know that I’m all yours

I’m not running anymore

I just want to run to you

It only took a month

To fall for you..

Reviews

[Soul Magic✯]

beautifully expressed. i enjoyed the content in this piece... it's so sweet and heartfelt

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this one alot... very beautifully done, upbeat and well expressed... overall you did a superb job on this..nice work!!!

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful well written piece. I think sometimes it is the hardest when we put our emotions on the line for someone and they walk away. Well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When love is right it is undeniable and inescapable... a real simple down to earth poem expressing pure emotion.

[Bud]

Yes, it's a wonderful kind of hurt when yearning for the one you love, the one who holds your heart. Excellent.

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful and beautiful write here. I really liked this one alot. This is very well written

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Beautiful poem, very loving, you are truelly in love and Happy , and thats wonderful :)

[HorrorMaster]

Aww I love this one. *hugs at this poem*