Let Loose

Let Loose

Everyone that knows me

Knows that I don’t dance

This past weekend

I took a chance

I saw all of the others dancing

Seeing how much fun they were having

My sisters saw me standing there

They called me over to dance with them

Something hit me, I didn’t hesitate at all

I just walked up and started dancing

Shaking my hips back and forth

Letting my hair fly around

Moving my feet and arms

They were yelling “How low can you go”

So we all went down low

I didn’t know I could do that

I felt so good dancing

Having such a good time

Laughing, smiling, letting go

I just let loose

I didn’t care who was watching

Or what they thought of me

I was having fun with my friends and family

Everything just disappeared

It was just me and the dance floor

I put all my worries and hurt

In the back of my mind

And just danced

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

HAHA, Thats cool :)

[Soul Magic✯]

yes get down girl *LOL* you created a very nice piece. great seeing you having fun. i enjoyed the read :)

[Bud]

Yes, I have been there... lol And you're right... it feels good to just let loose some times. We all have abilities, they're locked away behind 'I can't do that'...

[Frantzuu]

Very nice poem :D

[deeps]

This is lively and cute I really enjoyed this one.

[larryb]

Nice lil story I hope it was true :) its so nice to just let loose and not care what anyone cares or if anyone is watching you.....

[Hippy]

right on man wish i could dance it seems like good thing to be able to clear your mind to

[Stacey Watts]

This was so much fun. Music and moving seems to be good therapy for the soul sometimes. Very well written piece.

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

It's a wild feeling huh?

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing my dear. I love your poem.