Inquisitive

Inspired by a delightful four year old.

Basking in the beautiful raidence
Warmth washing over it
Lifting its face twoard heaven
Little ones laughter spills out
As she bends to examine the crocus at her feet
Petals a beautiful cross between violet and amythest

Skip along the verdent grass
Pick the wild flowers
Make a bouquet for Mommy
Sing tunelessly
Downy gossamar clouds wafting along
Cerulean skies of midday

On hands and knees
Peeping, scrutinizing, in awe
On marches the ant oblivious
Hardset to its task
Onyx body shining in the sun
Herculean strength

Head full of riotous curls
Tilting to the side
Tounge to the side of her mouth in concentration
Pulling the purple chalk one line at a time across the sidewalk
Beaming smile flashes up triumphant
"Look I drew a cwocruus"

Reviews

[DBURKE]

This poem had a really good flow, great imagery, and absolutely precious! I loved it!

[Gionelly Kiss]

Wonderful poem. Lively imagery that makes the reader stop and think. Although, it was at first a little confusing I came to appreciate its full power at the end. Wonderful job. No suggestions. Thanks for sharing.
gionelly*Kiss

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the story and the flow of the words. Nothing like the hope and innocence of a child.
Coyote

[Lucia Morgan]

good flow. great imagery. my favorite lines, even though it is all equally delishious, are, "skip along the verdent grass", "onyx body shining in the sun", and "sing tunelessly"

[Simple_mee]

Nice flow and b'fully written.. ;))

[MagiCrystal]

This is so beautiful and the flow is like water.. so cool..