LIFE IS LIKE A RIVER

this is my first ever free verse peom ever hope you like it

LIFE IS LIKE A RIVER

Life is like a river

With the flow of

love desievment and hatred

Boundrys twist and turns

unknow off

Thrillment excitement speed

Some parts so dreadful

Two part way

Decision to make

You make a wrong turn

You come to an end

Water splashing in your face

No more hate jealousy or sadness

All troubles flow by

Drowning in to the dark blue

light quickly dimming

Life is like a river

You fall then rise again

　

　

　

　

Author's Note

ex: ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

very pretty :) reminded me of the song by bette midler "the rose" "Some say love, it is a river That drowns the tender reed
Some say love, it is a razor
That leaves your soul to bleed"