Poetria's Creed

Poetria's Creed

A Poem by Light
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Behind the Words...

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Spare me,
from humanity's greed,
gift me,
a place closer to heaven,
enraptured in the universe's arms  
saved, drifting swiftly 
My being is warm,
I'm sprinkling like
the calm raindrops.

Release me from
the ground, 
higher the spirit,
though, my soul is wounded
still the brightness of my heart
I will sacrifice,
I have a reserve of Love,
where the fountain of affections
ever pounding,
so when the world falls,
I will birth my throbs
for earth, to rise again.

Embrace me,
my faithful entity 
and rescue me
from my raging tides,
I breathed the sigh of divinity 
from His lips, into my roots
a little He knew
a little He knows 
and now I think of me;
Who am I?

I'm a thought;
a thought that feels
that abounds and sings,
You don't have to like my words
or understand,
and how many still are there
dreaming to print my heart,
to affect You 
to impress You
how many verses still are there 
to love You.

When I'm floated away,
Read me again
and leave heavens
to shed my prayers,
then, emerge me from Joy
in wondrous forms,
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is,
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart, unto Yours
that I'm not the dream,
but the reality 
dwells in the miracle of,
Your breathing sound.


©  Gh ~*
 19.8.2017  

                                   

© 2018 Light


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Behind the words indeed. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece, which looks beyond the words and what they say about us. No matter the words, we only see an imprint of the person behind them, when they are infinitely more than the brief moments we feel your words.
I think we have grown so used to instant gratification, that it is almost impossible for anyone to have time to see what is behind the pen.
Pity really. We never learn.
Beautifully penned, thought provoking write.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Thank You Lorry for Your wonderful thoughts here, I agree with You about the instant gratification (.. read more
Lorry

1 Year Ago

My pleasure.



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I've not read anything this moving in a long time. I find so much genuine humility and love in this poem. But this echoes softly long after reading...

Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is,
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart, unto Yours

What I read here is the essence of love, sharing the good and the bad, the dark and the light, the smiles and the tears, as one body and heart.

An exceptional work that it beautifully illustrated.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

thank You so much my friend for these beautiful words of understanding, the last lines of the last v.. read more
thank you for the enlightenment of your luminosity... so strong are these lines from your heart they shimmer off the screen and into mine as I read them. No finer a result can come from any writing than that. I can say nothing clever or witty about them I cant even speak of the mechanics or style this is just simply a lovely set of lines

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

the sincerest thanks go to You my ever wonderful and kind friend, dear Bunny🐰 You always gift me .. read more
mwahvelous education i have received in just the title Light!... thank you!! i had not idea there was such a movement way back when to define and use "perceptive grammar" ... where oh where do you go on your days off ;)))))))))))))))) love this:
'Im sprinkling like
the calm raindrops." .."my faithful entity" ... interesting word choice (entity) my friend .. the setting is intimate but is distant as well ...really like the "....reserve of love" ... so uplifting in what can be a difficult world .. we can "hang in there" ... we can "stand it" ;) i think there is so much great stuff in your poem ...religion, spirituality, philosophy .."..I'm a thought" ..aint it the truth! a simple and profound acceptance ... i only imagine how much has been written on consciousness .. and where it comes from .. and then the poetess speaks ...abstract is always risky .. dances between too much and not understandable at all ... and not enough to where intent is clearly defined and does not allow one to imagine more ... and of course i really like how you close it all up with our oneness .. in love itself .. and how it is not only possible but a reality ... read this several times ... each time a nugget leaped at me ... very stimulating, thought provoking poem says i!
E.



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

I'm both humbled and pleased to receive Your words and in-depth review my fine friend E, You know ho.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))
What a wonderful heartfelt piece, delivered so sincerely, little butterfly. I could feel the warmth and intensity with which these words were written. You shine with every passionate word you place on page. A re read is sure but I must applaud your genius...again

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

8 Months Ago

Morning sweetest Kitty 🌸☕🌸

You are far too kind fo this humble girl, thank Yo.. read more
kitty

8 Months Ago

My pleasure always!
Your poem is incredibly lyrical & heartfelt, like a melody for one's divine leader. The part of your message that appeals to me is toward the beginning, as you describe "surrender" in terms that could be about leaving this planet in the flesh . . . or it could be about learning to let go of the earthly drudgery that gets us all down from time to time & learning to soar above it all. My only slight dip in interest came during the last stanza . . . I'm not a big fan of generalized love expressions in poetry, so I sorta drifted off at that point, where your message felt a teensy bit less fresh & inventive (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago


I've to say....This kind of poetry is one of my faves! Smooth, coaxing, love filled and always provides an amazing read...
The thing I love the most here is you were not lost in imagination but sticking at realism...thanks for this wonderful read dear Light angel! **Love and hugs** ♡♡

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Highness!!!BLUSH*😳
NO MORE

1 Year Ago

You are!😘
Light

1 Year Ago

😍😊🤗😘😘❤️️💗❤️️
When you talk about love lock stock and barrel, these words would be just that. "How many verses are there to love You", I would guess that would be as many as it takes to describe every grain of sand in the ocean and on the beaches until one grows tired. Full of emotion and romance...loved it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

sweet how You say it my friend, yes... they would be countless, endless... as long as the heart beat.. read more
This has become one of my favorite poems from you... It's sweet yet dark, simple yet profound... Simply love the way you craft your lines

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Thank You my friend for Your lovely words and much appreciated compliment, Your visit means a lot :).. read more
DarkMist

1 Year Ago

It is entirely my pleasure :)
Like an earnest prayer this had me hooked. Best thing on the internet today. You do justice to your penname.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

how kind of You my sweet friend, thank You for the warmth You gifted my poetic spirit this morning, .. read more
Like a wonderful gratification Prayer of thanks. For loving God and honouring him.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Thank You dear Dee, You are always so kind and sweet to me, thank You for taking the time to read my.. read more
Dawn

1 Year Ago

Aw Light, like wise you are always so kind towards me. Bless you sweetheart.
Light

1 Year Ago

Bless You too my dear*

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